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  <title type="text">Conversation on The Sacramento Press about: “Improve your Writing” workshop aids community members</title>
  <link rel="alternate" href="http://www.sacramentopress.com/headline/33325" />
  <subtitle>Tuesday night, The Sacramento Press office was the place to be if you wanted to improve your writing.

Clare Noonan—who has more than 20 years’ experience working as a reporter and copy editor for The Modesto Bee and The Sacramento Press—presented to a crowd of roughly 50 people to “Improve Your Writing and Self-Editing.”

The interactive workshop focused on tips for self-editing and common mistakes that Noonan found when reading copy.

“Get rid of the clunk,” she said.

She suggested to “tigh...</subtitle>
  <dc:creator>Aeruggie</dc:creator>
  <entry>
    <title type="text">By: MichelleK</title>
    <link rel="alternate" href="http://www.sacramentopress.com/comment/33610/I_am_so_sorry_I_missed_this_I_have_been_going_to_classes_held_at_the_library_instead" />
    <author>
      <name>MichelleK</name>
    </author>
    <id>comment-33610</id>
    <updated>2010-07-27T16:44:57Z</updated>
    <published>2010-07-27T16:44:57Z</published>
    <content type="text">I am so sorry I missed this. I have been going to classes held at the library instead</content>
    <dc:creator>MichelleK</dc:creator>
    <dc:date>2010-07-27T16:44:57Z</dc:date>
  </entry>
  <entry>
    <title type="text">By: Colleen Belcher</title>
    <link rel="alternate" href="http://www.sacramentopress.com/comment/33496/Yes_LandParker_I_will_email_them_to_you_on_Monday_If_anyone_else_would_like_copies_email_me_at_coll" />
    <author>
      <name>Colleen Belcher</name>
    </author>
    <id>comment-33496</id>
    <updated>2010-07-24T19:42:21Z</updated>
    <published>2010-07-24T19:42:21Z</published>
    <content type="text">Yes, LandParker. I will e-mail them to you on Monday. If anyone else would like copies, e-mail me at colleen@sacramentopress.com.</content>
    <dc:creator>Colleen Belcher</dc:creator>
    <dc:date>2010-07-24T19:42:21Z</dc:date>
  </entry>
  <entry>
    <title type="text">By: Craig Powell</title>
    <link rel="alternate" href="http://www.sacramentopress.com/comment/33393/Is_it_possible_to_obtain_copies_of_the_materials_that_Ms_Noonans_used_in_her_discussion_These_would" />
    <author>
      <name>Craig Powell</name>
    </author>
    <id>comment-33393</id>
    <updated>2010-07-23T14:54:30Z</updated>
    <published>2010-07-23T14:54:30Z</published>
    <content type="text">Is it possible to obtain copies of the materials that Ms. Noonan's used in her discussion?  These would be terrific sessions to record (video or just audio) for broader dissemination.  Thanks, SacPress, for bringing such instructional seminars to Sacramento.  It is an awesome public service.</content>
    <dc:creator>Craig Powell</dc:creator>
    <dc:date>2010-07-23T14:54:30Z</dc:date>
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